10 Things that Make a Smacking Good Horror Story

 

Writing a horror story? See whether you have these 10 things in place.

Writing a horror story? You have the plot, but are you hitting the right notes? Here is a quick checklist based on celebrated works of famous writers of the genre. Whether it is for a submission or for your novel, see if you are doing the right thing with your horror story. Writing tips from Neil D’Silva.

  • A protagonist whom everyone feels sad for, and roots for.
  • An antagonist capable of unleashing the most unimaginable evil.
  • Flaws; a truly chilling story feeds on the flaws of its people.
  • Stakes so high they could pierce the sky.
  • A place where no one wants to be.
  • A time when no one wants to be alone.
  • Hurt of the kind that is unbearable to even think about, lot less to experience.
  • Sounds, sights, smells, tastes, and touches that make you wish you never had the five senses.
  • Language that speaks minimally, but with words and phrases that keep swirling in the mind.
  • A climax that plays on and on in the reader’s miserable mind.

To read acclaimed horror shorts from Neil D’Silva, click on the following:

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Horrors d’Oeuvres (History Edition)

There are few things as horrifying as real-life events. History is full of untold horrors. Some of these darkest reminders of humanity are encapsulated in this special History Edition of Horrors d’Oeuvres.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Read the entire series here: Horrors d’Oeuvres

 

If these horrors d’oeuvres set your appetite right, go here for the full buffet! Check out these full-length novels and short-story collections from the author.

Maya’s New Husband

The Evil Eye and the Charm

Bound in Love

Pishacha

Horrors d’Oeuvres (Batch 3)

More from the hot horrific oven.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Read the previous installments here:

Horrors d’Oeuvres (Batch 1)

Horrors d’Oeuvres (Batch 2)

 

If these horrors d’oeuvres set your appetite right, go here for the full buffet! Check out these full-length novels and short-story collections from the author.

Maya’s New Husband

The Evil Eye and the Charm

Bound in Love

Pishacha

Horrors d’Oeuvres (Batch 1)

Presenting the first installment of Horrors d’Oeuvres. Horror and terror stories in small bites… err… words.

 

Feel free to share your own short horror stories in the comments below.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Go on to read Horrors d’Oeuvres (Batch 2).

 

If these horrors d’oeuvres set your appetite right, go here for the full buffet! Check out these full-length novels and short-story collections from the author.

Maya’s New Husband

The Evil Eye and the Charm

Bound in Love

Pishacha

MicroHorror Tales (Volume 2)

VOLUME 2

(c) Neil D’Silva

Wine

For shuck’s sake, why didn’t I stop at the third glass?

They pushed me into it; it was not my fault. And where are they now? Friends, a-holes, all the same.

Screw them. I can make this walk home on my own.

Good I walked. Good I dumped the car back there. Where but? Can’t remember. I told you I was woozy.

It’s okay. I just need to remember. Pavement, pavement, pavement. Easy!

Gosh! What’s that? Need to clear this vision, dang these streetlights.

Is that an accident? An ACCIDENT?

The car’s banged clean into the tree. The poor sod who was in it… he’ll be a pulp. I must go and see. Need to see. Maybe I can save him.

“Hey mister, hey! Are you all right?”

Why does he look familiar?

Sheesh! His face is pretty smashed. But–

Isn’t this my car? And… and… why does he have my face?


Cuddles

As Sapna lay on her bed sleeping, she felt her baby snuggle close to her. Stirring in her sleep, she took the little arm in her hand.

“Ananya,” she mumbled without opening her eyes. “Not sleepy, baby?”

But the child only put her other arm on her mother’s belly. Sapna took that one in her other hand.

“What games are you up to, Ana? Go back to sleep!”

But then, another arm – a third arm – clamped itself on her belly.

Gasping a gallon of air and not sure whether she shrieked or not, Sapna sat right up in bed, her eyes wide open now.

It was all empty. An empty room, an empty bed, as it had been a lot lately.

And amidst that terror-stricken heaving, she saw the photo of her baby on the wall, which she had been been garlanding since the past one year.


Grim

“The baby is crying, Adrian” yelled Susan, her hands immersed in the dishes. “Can’t you for once go upstairs and check?”

She resumed scrubbing the nasty spot on the saucepan and kept it to dry. Then she looked into the child monitor again. Little Scot was in his father’s arms now, staring over his shoulder right into the camera. Susan smiled back, knowing that the baby couldn’t see her, and yet she thought he smiled back.

Three minutes later, she heard the footsteps going upstairs. “Such an idiot I am,” Adrian was saying. “Got so engrossed in the chat. Going upstairs now.”

At that, Susan turned sharply at the monitor.

With eyes round as marbles, she saw the shadow holding the scythe over the mewling baby, and screamed.


Threes

I was driving along the highway in the dead of the night, but a STOP sign slowed me down. Two cops came along, looking as though hell had messed them up.

“Don’t go ahead,” one of them said.

“Why?” I asked. “I am a doctor. There’s an emergency.”

The other cop came ahead. “Dark as death ahead.”

“It’s okay,” I smiled and revving my car. “I treat death.”

But I had hardly driven for a minute when I had to pull my car to an abrupt stop. A branch of a banyan tree jutted onto the road and from it hung two human shapes. Scared witless, I coasted my car along and saw – they were the policemen I had seen not a moment ago, their chests ripped apart, their intestines hanging out.

From behind me, a mellow feminine voice hissed, “There’s space on the tree for a third.”


Wish

Malaika took her ring off and flung it on the bathroom floor. Then she disrobed and looked in the mirror. It wasn’t a pretty sight. The tears had streamed her kohl all over her cheeks.

“Why?” she said aloud between sobs. “Why did I trust that cheat?”

She moved her hand over her belly. It would begin showing any day now.

With shut eyes, she said, “I don’t want to live. You hear me? God? Devil? Whoever it is out there? I don’t want to live.”

Still crying, she turned the shower faucet on.

The cold water drops revived her for an instant. But only an instant.

For then she saw, in utmost horror, the strings of red meandering with the water towards the drain.

Her eyes went up to the showerhead. The water drops from the jet had turned into glass needles, thousands of tiny ones, and they were now shooting right into her soft flesh. The pain became alive now, but it was too late.

The last thing on her mind as the glass drops punctured her eyes were some ominous words of long ago:

Be careful of what you wish for.
Someone is always listening.

 

Go back to Volume 1.

New volumes every Sunday.

 

MicroHorror Tales (Volume 1)

VOLUME 1

(c) Neil D’Silva

Icebox

“We will find your wife soon,” said the Inspector. “But, tell me, Mr. Vishwas, did you both have a fight?”

“Of course, not!” said Vishwas, wiping away his tears. “Why should I fight? I love every bit of her.”

After the Inspector left, the tears dried up too. Vishwas went to his cafe downstairs, opened the icebox, and put the last finger on a dinner plate.

“Really,” he sniffled looking at it. “Loved every bit of her.”


Honeymoon

Paresh hadn’t laughed this hard in a long time.

Rolling on the bed of his honeymoon suite, he told his new wife, “I’ve married a sissy! It was just a ‘Boo!’ and how you jumped in that bridal dress! What a riot!”

He laughed for long minutes till he realized she was miffed. “Sorry,” he then said to her, holding back the last vestiges of his laughter. “I hope you aren’t pissed.”

“No,” she said, still sulking.

“Really?”

“I have a sense of humor. Don’t worry.”

Still shivering with laughter, he took off his shirt, and sat next to her.

That was when the laughter stopped.

For he found that her nails, which were long talons now, were pierced into his back; and her eyes were now glassy and lifeless, with which she looked down upon his rapidly draining face.

“And this is the final joke,” she said with an expressionless face.


Rats!

Little Alex tiptoed into the house and looked for his mother. She saw him first though.

“Alex!” she boomed. “I saw you speaking with that old Mrs. Jenkins again.”

Alex, now caught, stood firm. “Why should I not, mother?”

His chubby face always softened Pearl, whatever mood she was in. Kneeling beside her son, she told him, “Alex, dear! Okay, let me tell you. People say Mrs. Jenkins is a witch. She does something to little boys like you and turns them into ugly giant rats with furry tails.”

Alex stared at her with his blackberry eyes.

“It’s okay, Alex,” said Pearl. “As long as you don’t go to her anymore. Don’t eat anything she ever gives you.”

That was when Alex felt the itch in his lower back, and when his fingers went there, he felt the little knob of hair.

Fur?

He slowly let the chocolate wrapper drop from his other hand.

“Rats!” he exclaimed to his befuddled mother.


Teddy

The article finally over, Marsha shut her laptop. Before tucking herself into bed, she went to check on her ten-year-old. She opened his door only a crack and was appalled. Striding right in, she yanked the teddy off his arms.

Ronny stirred awake. “Mumma? What?”

“What’s with the teddy bear?” Marsha yelled. “Aren’t you getting too old for this?”

“But, mumma,” he said, “Teddy is feeling scared.”

Without stopping for an answer, Marsha strode out just as she had come in, the teddy dangling from her hand. Throwing it on the floor of her room, she stepped into her bed.

It was in the middle of the night that she was roused awake.

She rubbed her eyes and saw the fluffy brown mass of the teddy bear – clipped ear, broken eye, and all – with its arm around her midriff.

“Mumma,” came a hoarse voice from the twisted mouth of the stuffed animal. “I really do get scared.”


TV

Girish had begun to love his new rental flat. The TV blaring in the neighbors’ house kept him entertained. The thin walls had actually proven to be a blessing in disguise.

Most times, the TV blared songs of the Golden Age of the 60s, the time when he grew up as a lonely child. Notes of sad retro songs wafted into his room like someone were massaging his tired head. At times the songs were happy, which enlivened him, and sometimes they were inspiring, and he found himself shaking his limbs to them.

As the days went by, he felt his mood attuning itself to the emotions of the songs. It was as if the songs spoke to him.

After the first month, the landlord came to collect the rent. “I hope you are not feeling lonely here,” he said.

“Not at all,” said Girish. “The neighbors’ TV keeps me entertained.”

“What neighbors?” asked the landlord then, the color draining from his face. “No one has stayed there since ten years, since the old couple was found hanging from the ceiling.”

But Girish would not believe him. From somewhere, faint strains of an age-old song of loneliness encroached upon his head and adamantly refused to leave it.

 

 

Read on for Volume 2.

 

Serialized Stories

These are episodic stories written by Neil D’Silva. Each of these stories are divided in parts, ranging from two to seven. Like of the author’s other works, they delve into the disturbed psyche of the human mind, often shedding light on new revelations and parts of the psyche that was perhaps unexplored before.

Following a huge fight, Grandma leaves home with a suitcase. No one knows what its contents are, but they are decidedly dearmost to her heart.
Caution # 1: Never stop on a strange road. Caution # 2: Never weep about your woes to a stranger.
Hank Greenhorn hates Christmas, so much so that he spoils everyone’s Christmas. It takes a strange intervention to make him mend his ways. This is an out-of-the-ordinary Christmas parable for children and adults alike.
A thirteen-year old boy is introduced to his next-door neighbor, Marlena, who ignites passions in him that he had never known before.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A photographer brings a strange but extraordinarily beautiful woman home. Slowly, he begins to realize this is not going to be as enjoyable a ride as he hoped it to be.
A devout young woman, abducted by a mysterious stranger, finds her faith tested.
A brother, living under the shadow of his older brother, discovers an ancient family curse, and uses it to his advantage.

Short Stories

Here are stories that you could read in one bite, but the taste they leave in your mouth will last forever. Find here some unforgettable short stories written by Neil D’Silva on different themes, ranging from the highly optimistic to the very dark.

 

A man brings a child home as a noble gesture. Then hell boils over.
Mercy Gleeson hasn’t overcome the loss of her boyfriend last year. But, this Valentine’s Day, he shows up at her door up in a tux, with a bouquet of white orchids.
An over-burdened daughter comes to her father with a strange request, that she wants to be born again. But is rebirth the solution, even if it were possible?
A wounded war soldier meets another in his final moments, and a strange comradeship is struck.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Julie loves him unconditionally and would do anything for him. She lives in the hope that he’d respond someday in some measure too.
A superstar has achieved everything he wanted. It is time for his final performance, a performance that he feels would make history.
Death comes with silent feet and spares no one. But what if one were to change its course, change the very destiny of death?
Parker Greene is dying. But as he dies, a shocking revelation awaits him.

 

 

 

Rising

This pinnacle, this pedestal, this face

Isn’t this my rightful place?

The superstar hovered above all, the crowds by his feet, the open sky above him. This was the moment he had lived for. This was for what he had endured all those difficult times of trying to make people believe in him, of trying to win the love and compassion of these people. Now, at this moment of his grand performance, he stayed silent, taking it all in.

Even through his tired eyes, he could see the crowds. They were all over the place. Every inch of the open ground was covered with them. Children sat on their fathers’ shoulders to get a better view. Women stood at the fringes of the crowd, trying to absorb every glimpse they got of the superstar. Young men climbed on whatever they could—rocks, rooftops, trees—to see the man they had come to see.

However, what made the superstar feel deeply contented within was that this was not a passive crowd. Many of these spectators were cheering him on, whistling and hooting and applauding. There were many that were even booing him too, wanting him out of the stage. But, he did not mind that—he accepted that no one could have universal appeal. The thing that pleased him, though, was that they were all chanting his name. Every child knew him now. Every household spoke of him. His name was on the lips of the poorest beggar and the richest master. People could ignore him, but they could never forget him.

The difficult struggle had begun to bear fruit several days ago. People who spoke highly of him spread his name. The word-of-mouth brought more people to witness his performance. He was new and his art was something that had never been seen before, but he stayed undeterred; he knew this was what he was born for. He was made to influence and inspire these audiences. He thought of his early boyhood days laboring away with his father in a shed, and he thought how right he was to give that up and pursue his mission. The laborer’s life was not meant for him.

The journey hadn’t been easy though. He had competitors and some archrivals. At every step, he met with temptations to give up his practice—temptations of riches and power. But this was the only thing he believed in. He shunned the temptation with great passion, stayed truthful to his performance.

It had borne fruit too. Just the previous day, he met the King. At that time, he felt as though this meeting was fated to happen; it was in his stars. The head of state was impressed by him. Though he was the leader of this part of the world, he did not look upon him as a superior meeting an inferior, but they met as two equals. Thousands of people lined up to hear their conversation. The superstar met the King with his head held high, and fielded all his questions with poise.

After that meeting, the crowd chanted his name all the more louder. They just could not get enough of him.

Walking up to this grand stage wasn’t easy either. The security detail had been lacking, but that was part of the plan. It was so that the crowd could get close to him, and they did. They even tore his clothes and distributed it among themselves, but he did not mind that. They would get his body anyway. He was all for giving up his body to his cheering fans. He was making history.

The afternoon clouds were gathering now, and it was the time for his final performance.

Hovering there, almost naked, higher than everyone else, he thought of the accomplishment of his three-decade long journey. Now, it would be just three more days and his detractors would be silenced. For generations. And for that, he did not mind the crucifixion at the cross between two robbers.

He knew he would rise again in three days. His rising would restore the faith in the world.

END